The feedback we recieved from other groups was in general very good our strongest aspects were the i stop motion, people liked the little Salt and Peppa men and this was one of the main apsects of voyerism which was incorperated into our music video. Other strong aspects were the fast forward of Ruby walking and the individual shots of each of us singing. The things we were told to work on were the lip syncing of the words and the general quality of the video especially the i stop motion, people felt that the odd shot of a hand and the bluetack detracted from the quality and the voyerism.